inside the mall/ outside the mall

air conditioning
chills me until I step out
into a warm hug

(it’s like summer today!)

Tags: artificial vs natural environments, spring haiku

This entry was posted on June 1, 2009 at 5:54 pm and is filed under haiku, nature, summer. You can follow any responses to this entry through the RSS 2.0 feed. You can leave a response, or trackback from your own site.

3 Responses to “inside the mall/ outside the mall”

Lucy Coats Says:
June 8, 2009 at 6:33 am | Reply
Nice haiku. I like it very much! I just wish we were in the warm hug of summer here in the UK, where it’s more like the damp embrace of autumn.

Lucy at http://www.scribblecitycentral.blogspot.com (and also at An Awfully Big Blog Adventure)
Jacqueline Pearce Says:
June 8, 2009 at 12:50 pm | Reply
Thanks, Lucy! 🙂 I enjoyed the tree memories on your blog. “Favourite trees I have known” is on my list of things to post about here.
Lucy Coats Says:
June 9, 2009 at 4:58 am | Reply
Just thought you’d like to know that your haiku and Japanese trip sparked something for me 🙂 –I’ve mentioned you on the blog, so hope you get traffic!

Lucy at http://scribblecitycentral.blogspot.com

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