Haiku for a summer visit to Vancouver Island

hundreds flew over

when my father was a boy

twelve nighthawks tonight

3 Responses to “Haiku for a summer visit to Vancouver Island”

  1. phrees Says:

    Nice, but I’d like a break in the middle line to give more separation between the decades, something like:

    “when dad was a boy, I count”

  2. Sandy Says:

    I like it!

  3. Jacqueline Pearce Says:

    Thanks for the comments!

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